I need some opinion for this melody

https://soundcloud.com/dj_dnt_01/stupid-chord-melody-with-supersaw

It's just a dark melody, it will be used for mystic things in the future...
I'm not totally a noob in music production, and i have also a great music knowledge (I still play an instrument), and of course, i know how these synths and other things work. What do you think?

I've heard melodies similar to this one before. It must be popular for producers. I don't know the sound name to let you know what needs to be changed, but I would have more of the regular sounds turned up and lower the volume of the... supersaw(?); that sound that kinda goes up and down and goes "woov woov woov woov" and the sounds that kinda change rhythm throughout the tune, I would have them turned up or just more amplified, like make it come out more.

That's all I can suggest, as I don't know anything about music theory, even though I do have an electric piano (Yamaha PSR 290), but never really got around to picking it up and seeing what I can do with it. I have FL Studio and I can't seem to stick to it and attempt to learn it. I start it, fiddle around with a beat, then I just give up on it every time. I'm not very commited to picking up things I know I'd be good at.

I think you're doing pretty good, man. Can't wait to see how it sounds when finished.

Is a popular technique to make melodies. I'm still working on that, so i will make changes surely.
I want also to say you a thing... i know that you feel disoriented in all those knobs... Everyone started with this feeling, but all you must do is just play around with things, and read a bit of theorical guides/manuals to learn how the things work, and it help a lot. I started like a year ago with this, and step by step i learned new things, of course i was helped from my music knowledge, but is not a big problem... If you see in the related tracks, there is a track made by a friend, he haven't a music knowledge, completely nothing, but he knows how things works and he do what he like to listen, so never give up